Around The Lake Comments

About to sleep through winter's cold, ..................................................... . It is a fine metaphor, Around the lake the trees surround .................................................... .........Brilliant picture.. 10... Tsira

The fall out of leaves is compared to falling of whispers...yes...leaves do whisper to breeze...draped in the shade of morning light, the weeping willow stands mourning...good poetic imagery...impressive work, Andrew...nice to read 10/10

Andrew, what a beautiftull way of describing the onset of winter/end of summer. Anticipation of what mother nature has in store...... This is a wonderfull piece of nature penned with so much tenderness..... Bonnie

A bouquet of colours, brilliant scenery Andrew Love duncan X

Superb. Autumn splendour here in all its entirety. Wonderful read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

'A whisper of the summer gone As they fall without a sound.' How beautiful this poem is...Thanks again...10.

the embodiment of poet here with all the trimmings, wow, and such a visual visceral treat!