Thursday, July 25, 2013

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(I saw my tears rippling down in the streams
I found all my pains dancing in my dreams)

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In a white uncrumpled paper, I would
I could do so before, my stumbling mood
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AMITAVA MAZUMDAR
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2017

The golden streaks and luminous fragments of evening But I couldn’t capture to get something a little simmering very fine poem.. you have actually described the pain when you as a poet are not able to scribble what is in your mind, and what wells up in your consciousness, very fine poem thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2016

The golden streaks and luminous fragments of evening But I couldn’t capture to get something a little simmering amitav mazumdar.. The struggle of a poet when he engages himself in writing. dear poet you have excellently brought to life this struggle. thank you very much. tony

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful write. Loved reading it.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 31 July 2013

good poem with good imagery thanks for sharing

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