Tuesday, November 19, 2024

Around Me 01 - A Warning Comments

Rating: 5.0

The squirrel squeaked and barked
A kite flew in low circles
The tree stood still an' smiled.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Adookorn Auaduma 23 November 2024

An articulated verse of brevity that speaks volume, inspires me!

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Rebecca Navarre 23 November 2024

Again Wow! .. I love the sentiments in this! .. Absolutely magnificent! .. Absolutely wonderful! .. Endless, endless 10'S Ans Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 23 November 2024

For a warming... This is absolutely beautiful! .. I just love this! .. Absolutely wonderful! ..

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The warning of the squirrel is for other rodents that are prey of the eagle. For the tree on which the squirrel is perched, kite is just another flying object (AFO) and poses no threat.

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Dee Gey 20 November 2024

These lines create a vivid, almost whimsical scene, full of sensory and emotional contrasts.

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Sandra Feldman 19 November 2024

Nice promenade in the park. Greatly enjoyed this poetic moment of freedom.Thank you, much!

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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