Monday, November 23, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Happened to be there by chance as always,
Not like the others I have become tired and slow,
Making this choice from variations that are not there,
Small, neat and rounded to the simplicity of a virtue,
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Joanne Kearsey
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Marieta Maglas 23 November 2009

Un-conciously aware of the plot that's unfolding towards ourselves, Excellent philosophical poem, very well written. The similes, the anti-similes and metaphors are very well used to convey the message. 10++++++++++

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Joanne Kearsey

Joanne Kearsey

Brighton, England
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