Friday, July 6, 2018

Aroma Of The Spirit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pierce the layers of colors,
Strip the shapes of their particular outlines,
Feel a contactless touch,
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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 July 2018

The Aroma Of The Spirit is a refined poem with the perfect choice of words. I cite here your lines: Discover blissfulness instead of pleasure...........................Enjoy now a truthful you, and finally in the end................... Polished of virtues and luminescent, Dip into the aroma of Spirit! YES, INTO The AROMA of Spirit! WOW! This must make any reader feel uplifted. God's Blessings in Abundance and a 10 +++++++++++++ for the vote.

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