Aroma Of Affection Comments

YES! ! ! I think I HAVE fallen into the 'blaze'. Quick! ! Bring me precipitation, maybe some of that dew, preferably cool dew. Anything will do! ! ! I've REALLY been quite 'lost' (not in a good way) in your poem, but....you seemed to want my help, and I WAS A 'BOY SCOUT'. ;)

'physique'? 'tresses'? (her hair, on head?) ...or did you want an 's' as the FIRST letter ALSO? ? [STRESSES? ]

line 9: aspiration(s) : 'Expulsion(s) of breath in speech' Is THAT what you're talking about? ?

line 2: 'numerous sentiments'? Maybe you meant 'sediments'? I don't know whether to laugh or to cry at my comment. HMM? : ))))) : ((((( I decided to do BOTH. : ) I WAS being serious, seriously!

Class poem, craving to sip those droplets of dew as the rain starts to fall. Good feel of a woman.

Very very interesting poem.