Sunday, October 27, 2013

Army Of Tombstones Comments

Rating: 4.9

As I sit with peace the sun is out
Very few people walking about
The trees to the music of the wind are blowing
The birds are singing, the crows are crowing
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Maria Gonzalez 26 July 2015

Death amidst life.....I get what you are saying here. Love it.

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Kevin Averett 01 May 2015

This one... I can relate to! Thanks! ! !

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Hannah Wolton-carr 29 April 2014

It is best to think on the bright side in such situations as death. There always is one.

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Kanav Justa 03 November 2013

The title suits the poem so well... amazing write

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Unwritten Soul 31 October 2013

The title is a strong choice, and the elegant lines did a good company too. Nice o nice_Soul

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Hazel Durham 28 October 2013

A brilliant write Lyn you set the scene so vividly, creating a serene feeling of been in a special place where people are at rest and their souls up above surrounded by God's love!

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Danny Draper 27 October 2013

A fine descriptive poem of the landscape and the place and commemoration of the people and their lives now remembered at rest in such peaceful surrounds. Well written.

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Valerie Dohren 27 October 2013

A beautiful poem Lyn, and certainly does not offend. A cemetery is a place of peace and memories, and you have captured that well here.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 October 2013

It's an absolutely magnificent poem! 10/10. While reading the poem, I was feeling as if I was sitting there! This is the success of a poet, to draw an imagery so spot on, that the readers just cannot but be with him/her. 'So as I sit here in peace surrounded by tombstones I do not think of the coffin, nor of the bones I think of these people that put their mark on this earth The History here, from today since birth' You have touched my heart with these lines, Lyn!

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Lyn Paul

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