Tuesday, March 14, 2006

Arms Comments

Rating: 5.0

swirling like fountains
something called out mouths to temper.
I melted into the shape of the sun
while you knelt to discover
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Declan McHenry 15 March 2006

Subtle. A very subtle write and not at all what I was expecting from the title. Thanks for surprising me.

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