Friday, February 8, 2013

Armored Hawk Of War Comments

Rating: 4.3

Parapets feint amongst the dawn's cruel violent skies,
blue toned mountain meadows shade brooding endless streams,
mirror lakes engulfing highland weeping pines
disappearing footholds in steep cut sheer faced dreams.
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Shahzia Batool 27 June 2013

mirror lakes engulfing highland weeping pines // Red spired cathedrals invade the mounting morning mist; // Diving swoops regains the breeze turning quickly falls, pushing currents, backward strokes then rests within our walls. // these are the lines in which i saw the scenes... the poem is an answer to the question...what is the richness of diction?

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Gajanan Mishra 08 February 2013

mystic lion Pushing current I like it. thanks.

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