Sunday, August 21, 2016

Armistice Comments

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Black sky, what secret
do you mask
beyond the farthest stars,
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Barry Middleton
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Pamela Sinicrope 21 August 2016

I have been sensing a shift in your writing for awhile now. This is beautifully written and conceived. The imagery is simple yet compelling. You've done a nice job of conveying your message in as few words as possible. No man can know the universe. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

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Barry Middleton 21 August 2016

This poem was written about a year ago. I think what I write is largely governed by my mood of the moment. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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