From house to house they go
demanding for what does
not belong to them, here they
display the words presure and
...
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The images are ok; it's poetic, and it's lyrical...however, you need to improve on your typography. I've also read your 'Africa Call': it is most emotive and serious, with all the flavours of poetry. I'll say keep it up. If you are chanced, I would like you to criticize my poem 'Rethink! ' Good times to you.
nice one....it is very gud explains armed robbers truly