Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, November 18, 2018

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Rating: 5.0

My parents wanted me to be a star,
but all I ever wanted was my books.
My talents couldn't take me very far,
and I was doomed to failure with my looks,
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Kim Barney
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Darwin Henry Beuning 20 November 2018

Kim, very nice.! ! I rate a 10

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Kim Barney 20 November 2018

Thanks, Hank! Funny thing about this poem: One of the judges in the contest (the one who judged this category) accidentally put the wrong code number on this poem, and it got credited to some lady in Florida! But when she received her check and certificate, she notified NFSPS that she had not written this poem, and two weeks and many phone calls later, it got straightened out and I finally got credit for it!

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wes vogler 22 November 2018

You do put yourself to the tasks, , I am far too lazy and would find the structure onerous. congratulations and by the way it ultimately reads very well

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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