Arm: Needle Comments

Strange poem but I did enjoy it...a lot of different meanings can be read from it. KK

Crazy but I like it! Here's hoping you're a diabetic! ! HG: -) xx

THIS IS A GREAT WRITE JON! KUDOS. ALWAYS AN EXISTENTIAL DILEMMA//////\\\\\\ALMOST A TAUNT IN YOUR ART - with dichotomy like 'keep on livin' or get on with dyin'.' THE THEME IS PROVACATIVE AND YOUR DELIVERY FLAWLESS. George, *likin' the writin'*

tenoutoften Jon, profoundly (well) written, above excellent, chilling realisation... x

I agree...This poem is simple yet deep, each word pairing fits like a glove. The last line is macabre & realistic, which makes it all the more scary..... A gem of a poem. Sincerely Nickie x x

A well-composed piece with an appropriate form. The last two lines are terrifying in their acceptance. t x

Violence, robbery... it always happens so...I love it :)

Sincerely hope Jon, these words aren't a precursor to a terrifying existence?

A nice balance. Simple and very effective use of language to convey a powerful message. I like this.

Simple yet deep. Simple yet deep. Neat one Jon.