very nice. 'Oasis' and the cracked stone of the last line are a little incongruous to me. I think I wanted to be left with the image of the rose as the last thing...(unless the last line has a meaning I didn't get)
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very nice. 'Oasis' and the cracked stone of the last line are a little incongruous to me. I think I wanted to be left with the image of the rose as the last thing...(unless the last line has a meaning I didn't get)