Friday, August 5, 2005

Arizona Dreaming Comments

Rating: 1.8

When I finally let it go
after being desert wanderer to your oasis
I found my parched heart
absorbed with you
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Gainor Ventresco
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Max Reif 05 August 2005

very nice. 'Oasis' and the cracked stone of the last line are a little incongruous to me. I think I wanted to be left with the image of the rose as the last thing...(unless the last line has a meaning I didn't get)

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