Saturday, February 25, 2006

Aristotle's Artless Autumn Comments

Rating: 4.5

Artless autumn leaves now fallen lifeless on the ground
have reached the end of summer's journey intricately found
as a multicolored blanket, blown by fall's frail breath;
the forest's fragile overlay has now met with death.
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COMMENTS
A. Michael Sears 05 March 2006

Well done indeed, Christine. A masterful use of rhyme, without the pretense oft associated. Moreover, I rather enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. ams

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Carolynn Shaw 25 February 2006

Christine, Although rhyme is not one of my favorite things. I love this poem. You handled this so well. It's a very smart work. A pleasure to read you, and looking forward to reading more of you. Warm Regards, Carolynn

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Christine K. Trease

Christine K. Trease

Price, Utah
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