Arise o sleeper
wake up to the morning song-
the sweet melodies of the birds
the cloud so bright and clear
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'hungry souls' - excellent. Similarly, entire poem. You can say what you want - into the concise way, delivering the needed information simultaneously, for understanding the poem. Very much I like such writing. (10 v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt
It is evident throughout that 'the bad sets with the sun and good rises with the sun' nicely done, i love it!
An enjoyable piece; another day presents more opportunities for the Kingdom; let us rest when we're dead; nicely done. -Joe
sweet melodies of the birds... it's fantastic! very nice poem
fantastic piece. so much tiem is wasting in sleep..
awakening piece....great thoughts shared to us... great words are striking... we have to arise and open our eyes to work towards helping each other's not to be deaf with the cries of other's soul... starts with our soul to help other's soul... 10+++
Laziness is a disease. Good lesson and great thought