Saturday, January 29, 2022

Arise From Dreams Comments

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Beneath a fervid sun, blooms open,
Black night has wandered into day,
The songs I hear say birds have woken,
Beneath a fervid sun. Blooms open!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Beneath a fervid sun, blooms open-. It's for certain

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 February 2022

Thank you for your delightful remarks.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 January 2022

wonderful poem Evelyn just wonderful

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 February 2022

Many thanks, LeeAnn.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 January 2022

As the Poet's Note says this poem is a TRIOLET, start and ending are repeated, lovely poem dear Evelyn.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 February 2022

Thank you, dear friend. I am so glad you enjoyed.

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Kim Barney 29 January 2022

Excellent work, Evelyn! The repetition works well here.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 29 January 2022

I appreciate your kind words very much.

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