Friday, October 31, 2008

Arima River Comments

Rating: 5.0

Along the riverside,
I watched the cadence
Of water; ripple, ripple,
In a continuous meandering;
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Gillena Cox
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Allemagne Roßmann 03 July 2012

Cognizance of the river for readers and a tribute to its existence in geography adding to your poetry its aura.Thanks for sharing.

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Indira Renganathan 19 September 2009

A serpentine watery life form....wonderful metaphoric expression...the whole poem in rippling flow....nice reading

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2009

A very nice piece of work from you and, thank you for sharing it with us. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Joseph Poewhit 31 October 2008

Paints a very nice picture

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