Arid Inscape Comments

this is a very powerful which portrays the personal agony of a future separation, it also hints vividly the helplessness of the poet through the symbol of 'caged bird' thanx.

I see creative passions flowing here - you capture the frustrations of this 'arid inscape' perfectly. JZ.

As I see it, here the poet is trying to speak up, yet the words/creative juices do not seem to flow! and it's beautifully penned..in true Asma style! ! !