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nice poem, I like it

Very logically you have painted the Dual-existence of person. As I see and as I hear or read by him are different. Yes, you have tried to paint the eternal asking of human being. H.L Borhes (as we pronounce in English) wrote in his diary, when I sit before the white pages of my diary to write poem, me not, another Borhes then write it. Perhaps commonly we call it the 'Alter-ego'. I tried to illustrate by Dual-existence. Above all you have really given us another masterpiece to read. Well-written and thank you very...very much. Regards, 10+++++ pranab

Tender and touching. Well done my friend!

I had a problem with the first line is that right.your was like? anyway good write

Like Love Spake: ILY is always winner…. Thanks…sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

I held you with my eye sight You totally transformed yourself Apparently into another person And you simply told me ''I love you'' ... LOVELY MOMENTS IN THE LIFE OF A PERSON..TO BE NICELY TAKEN CARE OFF......10 READ MINE// FINALLY SHE CAME

O what a climax! like the ball passing through Mesi and Higuain scoring a goal. So nicely arranged everything in the poem to utter the final three words >>>>Ideas fly like a bird, thoughts bloom like a flower and mind flows like a river. your poem deserves a tenner.