Sunday, November 25, 2007

Arguing With The Echo Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sat down on the rim
of the canyon,
and bawled then bellowed that that
promise, that that
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Sonny Rainshine
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Christine Austin Cole 22 May 2008

Oh, I like this piece and its well employed (and ridiculously appropriate) repetition. It flows incredibly well and delivers its point rather surreptitiously, but not so covertly as to go completely unnoticed. Love that! Very nicely done! Christine

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Bob Blackwell 07 December 2007

Wonderful write, the rebound sounds of self discovery. Keep writing. Bob

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Chris Mallia 27 November 2007

Love this one! ! Great idea

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Kathleen Foster 25 November 2007

Excellent write, Sonny Kathleen Foster

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