Friday, March 4, 2022

Argentine Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the horizon
A secret argentine moon
Peeps from behind clouds
Albeit most innocently
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 05 March 2022

Brilliant imagery. Nicely thought tanka.5****

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Thank you, my solemn attempt

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Beautiful.Like it.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Thank you for the appreciation, dear poet.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Happy to hear that you liked the poem. Thank you, Sir

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

A nice maiden Tanka.....appreciated it dear sir. Thanks for sharing this beautiful argentine moon poem with us.5 stars.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

I am not very sure this poem qualifies for a tanka, Dilipji. If you think yes, I am happy. And thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Hope you enjoy the poem

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

This is my first attempt at the poem form, Tanka.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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