Tuesday, July 20, 2021

Arena Of The Soul Comments

Rating: 4.0

ARENA OF THE SOUL
Poem by Chan Mongol
Jul 20 of 2021
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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 July 2021

You can change wilderness with good association; Destruction can be well built with reconstruction. Gorgeously worded, and so true. I have enjoyed very much this scintillating poem. Thank you for sharing.5 Stars full on Top!

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Luis A. Estable 21 July 2021

You write 'or, ' I think I should be 'or' or ', or' You put it before not after. It is a conjunction and it comes before not after as in the case of and or nor. Some lines in this are a bit on the no so clear side.

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