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'You are there in the tenderness of newborn In the stillness of the pond the whispers of new morn the silence of stars and moon'- - - We feel Him in our deepest heart - - - When doubt clouds our thought, we ask - - Where are YOU- -How YOU tolerate this injustice

A question millions have been asking since times immemorial. Faith is indeed tested when faced with some ugly realities but then there is joy and hope as well on the other side of the balance. And so we soldier on... A wonderfully penned plea to the almighty.

'Teach me to take each day at a time' It's like seeking solace in the arms of divine!

Yes! I am here? for what and whom u are/were searching? tum bhi na...........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Hey! Are u there? Knock knock........ thak...thak........

Lovely poem, Anjali. I love the the progression of thought.

Are you there? When hopes are hunted like a hare Are you there? When dreams are abandoned without care Are you there? When aspirations lies wounded and bare Great Write 10++++

I am still there in your question... is it not.. Hope

What if he isn't anywhere. What if he's a figment of our imagination to comfort ourselves. Then, we are responsible. Maybe it's up to all of us to change the way things appear to be. We all want to be rescued from the evils around us. I feel stronger in thinking that I am responsible for my own existence and nobody is going to throw me a life preserver. But I am a good swimmer: I will not drown, and in fact I have saved 2 other people from drowning some years ago. If I waited for divine help, instead of acting, my son would not be with me today. The other person was a total stranger. Or maybe he was someone else.

Indeed a hitting composition! ...thoughts on conditional Love, honor killing & degrading social norms...your poem is just awesome. I couldn't stop praising it. well done.10/10

Anjali, A striking poem! A big interrogation mark for divinity's Jekyll & Hyde creations. In appreciation, BHARAT

he is within you, u can make a difference, u can light a candle... ...awesome write..

now i'm here, the different way to live and I think to born, great

he is sleeping in the bottom depths of your mind...everybod seeks him in temples masjids...he is not there...hiding deep inside the mind...he is very happ there...nobody searches for him there... none wants true awakening... open your mind anju...he is there.. deep buried in your soul... read m poem 'nobody'

ur grandeur work made me straddle to the depth of my thoughts 10+++++

Mind blowing Anju! For me all this is wonder...

i great poem by a great poet...NJALI SINHA has done a great work...the 1st few lines are so impressive that...it catch the eye any new reader..made the poem stand out from the rest..10 for it..

Quite thought provoking.....sure he's there n seeing it all. NIce job, Keep writing :)

Idea and theme are really good. But it is very narrative.Poetry is not prose. You will have to express 1000 words in 100 words.

Amazing piece of art.....simply fantastic..From the tenderness of the new born to the slaughter of men, it's like a roller coaster ride goin throught this poem..two different contrasts that can only be brought abt with great poetic skills..hats off to u Anjali..

sommed up the cry of helpless humans in the hands of fanatics who kill in the name of religion, honour and other inagined causes.World require another Mahata Gandhi to check it and guide it.Chillig picture of today.Very well written, keep it up.10/10