Sunday, September 23, 2007

Are You The One? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Many a night, as I sleep, you come to me in my dreams.
Your sensual kiss, your gentle touch, so real to me it seems.

One kiss from your sweet lips, I loose my self control.
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Brian Mills 04 October 2007

WOW! ! ! this is a very powerful write here Poison......soooo very emotional.....and your choice of words spoke directly to my heart! ! ! every line brought back memories and the truth of losing a 'true love'.........but like ive been told if its TRUE LOVE....it will come back to you....so i patiantly wait & see her in my dreams just as you have described! ! ! hands down a 10 my friend! ! ! thnx soooo much for sharing! ! ! ! keep in touch buddy! ! Brian

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 23 September 2007

Mr. Poison. Wow...what a wonderful piece of writing. You have a 'poisoned' pen that is addicting in this write I read. You 2...keep inking up that pages. You are terrific.

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Brian Mills 23 September 2007

my friend......another truly delightful read.....loved all the emotions and visualizations you have in this one buddy.....great read! ! ! ! keep it up my friend..... 10 hands down.......... Brian

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