Thursday, July 26, 2012

Are You The One? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Runs to you without stopping,
As a child just starts walking,
Are you the one, composed the tune,
That plays in his mind and are you the one,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Valerie Dohren 28 July 2012

Lovely write, very imaginative.

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Juan Olivarez 27 July 2012

I can definitely say, I am not the one in this beautiful poem, but I wish I was.

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Savita Tyagi 26 July 2012

beautiful! such pleasure to read.

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Eric Cockrell 26 July 2012

very beautiful poem... well done!

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