Monday, September 21, 2020

Are You Still There? Comments

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Are you still there?

I am searching for you deep in my heart
I hope you have not decided to depart
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Terry Craddock 21 September 2020

'Are you still there? ' I love the way the entire poem hangs on this question, the depth of love in stanza 1, the shared children in stanza 2, the fear of separation in stanza 3, wonderful

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M Asim Nehal 21 September 2020

Special one. It is difficult to remove some special person from our heart and it is a bitter truth. Nice poem.

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