Are You Pretty? Comments

SO FULL of RAGE, PASSION< AND ANGER i simply love it good work ~MaXxwell Murder

I believe there may be a spelling error, but still a great poem. A definite 10 for truth and use of words. Enjoyed. -Kylie M. Lynch

This poem's message reminds me a little bit of The Carcass, by Baudelaire... have you read it? :) Anyway, I agree 100% with what you're saying here. Can I make you a suggestion, though? : P You could work some more on the poem's shape, so as to make the message sound more eloquent. Just a suggestion, :) Good job.