Monday, March 26, 2007

Are You Positive Comments

Rating: 4.5

Do you think of me at all?
You say you do
But are you sure?
Are you positive?
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Lu Vernezze
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Greenwolfe 1962 29 June 2008

Well, if he doesn't love you I do. I'm sure, I'm positive. Just keep writing this good poetry and I'll stay until your ink runs out, then I'm outta here. I gave this another 9. Frankly because I have an excuse not to give you a 10. You used the lower case I (i) several times. You still wouldn't get a ten, but it does give me a reason not to. Absolutely tremendous presentation! GW62

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