Are You Leaving? Comments

Reminds me of my dad when I was in college....He always told me if I could do it with two kids you can do it....and so I did :)

Very nice, Herbert...reminds me of the wisdom of my father...his words were not nearly as poetic as yours, though...I hope you don't mind I am sending this to my brother to read to his son...I love this...I am sure he will too...very well done... Lare

Herbert what a great truthfull poem to write in the heat of battle, i enjoyed the basic human truth, sorry the effect of the poem, has been spoilt by an overzealous fan of yours, is he in love with you, seems he is also looking for god Warm regards allan

Hi Herbert, Very touching poem.