Are You Just A Corrupted Heart Or A Haunted Soul? Comments

very good compositon, sharp, hard and strong against the corruption...

How very actual this poem is, it seems to be the reality that is dictated upon is by those bold ones that keep pushing the limits of what we can bear. Thanksgreetings from Sneek The Boomfriend

I appreciate your feelings painted in this piece.10 for your feeling. Thanks a lot for Bangladesh.

This is an excellent poem against social, political and economic evils.A full 10 for you.

wow! nice poem! very powerful!

Injustice and retribution is it their fate? good poem.

This is a fiery piece! ! ! Man, if this poetry is a reflection of you, in the stance for justice and fairness, firm belief that oppressors must not go unpunished- you are definitely a force to reckon with! I cherish what you stand for. Nice writing, great flow all the way.

I love the amount of passion and force that comes out of the words and definitely a tense atmosphere in the message that we all think about now in these days, very impressive.

i like this poem. nice arrgumentative properties in the poem.

i like it. maybe they didn't want to listen or they're too scared.

i love how u arraged ur words amounst the poem, p.s thanks for commenting on my poem: P

life is bigger my pal, bigger than you

CONSIDERING THE SCOPE OF YOUR OBSERVATIONS, YOUR THINKING AND PERFECT CORRALLING OF ALL THAT'S OUT THERE THAT NEEDS CORRECTION, CESSATION, PUNISHMENT, THERE IS NO NEED FOR ANYONE TO FOCUS ON YOUR FRIGGIN', PARDON ME, ENGLISH. YOUR PICTURE IS COMPLETE AND EASILY GRASPED. THE MAGNITUDE OF TRUTH, WISDOM, AWARENESS OF REALITY THAT YOU SHARE WITH US IS LARGER THAN LIFE AND TOUCHES UPON THE URGENT NEED FOR ALL US TO STOP BEING ACCEPTING AND COMPLACENT. WHAT A BRAIN YOU HAVE, SIR. OH, AND, YES, WHAT A HEART! THANK YOU VERY MUCH! CAROL

I think you mean the plural: politics. The line, dolls of the material - I don't know if that's described enough. The evil people you liken to dolls and zombies. I think you could show these more. They're artificial people - can you tell this just by sight, for example? Is this the way humans become when they are corrupted? Another phrase 'to the truth': I would leave out 'the.' I think I would like this poem better if each 3 lines were made into one. Just my opinion. It would read like lists, such as Anne Sexton did later in life and Erica Jong, for what it's worth. Kaye

Hurray to this poem for people who love and need justice! Another good write by you.

a harsh reality - many out there. I admire the way you wrote this - no beating about the 'bush' ;)

I like your style, straight to the point :)

vocabulariess very good. Add the to adjectives. eg. the selfish, the greedy, the malacious, the hungry, the ambitious correct curruptors to corrupts.

Same comments that before, a great job with few words...... excellent....