Are You Jealous? * Comments

A hindi/urdu translation of st stanza so k subah uthee hoon kaam ko jaanay k liyay tyaar hoti hoon tumhari khawaaish hoti hai tum mere jaisay ho uski meethi awaaz suntay ho jo kehti hai tumain: meri baby main chaahta hoon tumain nafrat karta nahin kabhi tumain tum karti ho muje? haaN karti ho naaN yeh such hai. jhooth bolna naaN muj se kabhi.

Ok you have got to tell me this story! I really want to know now.I love the poem.It made me start smiling because that is how I feel with my man.He is a big flirt but I know that it is just me in his life.

Very well written, good job.

this a is very natural feeling. excellent writeup.very well done.

i dont think i read this one yet but im glad i did. another great piece.

hey dont u worry Becca--you r the best Saint is yours always a lovely siloloquy -10 anjali

Nope, I thought I was then I came to my senses he's not worth it. Plus he wrote many love poems to me also... take care Wendy

Haha this poem is lucky. & you sound like a very lucky woman to have such a nice man. = ] (one thing though...You said you have him 'raped' around your finger....might want to put 'wrapped'....other wise this poem was awesome)

Nope and absolutely not... Wow what a poem.. It is clear concise and brilliant as always.10

Great and yes lol.. I like this poem very nice KRISTA