Are you in lust with the world and all its glory?
Are you caught up in fantasy, some fairy- tale story?
Do you live for the moment and crave after feeling,
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Fantastic penning Nora, you've captured this moment perfectly my friend..Bravo! !
it is a very nice poem.i loved it. nowadaya man is following the path in which he could find more and more money. i liked the lines 'are you caught up with the world and its glory? '
So true Nora...'those riches will stay, when your body departs'. I particularly value this line. It talks sense. Thanks for these words in your poetry. Good write
Your poem is very rich in content and is done very beauteously.
Lust is indeed a fantasy, bringing only a temporary influence......one totally devoid of spiritual satisfaction Your message......quite profound!
A real good poem, as far as rhyming goes, and I, ahh, take that you are a stronge believer in god.