Wednesday, July 16, 2008

' Are You In Lust? ' Comments

Rating: 3.1

Are you in lust with the world and all its glory?
Are you caught up in fantasy, some fairy- tale story?

Do you live for the moment and crave after feeling,
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Travis Flannigan 19 May 2010

A real good poem, as far as rhyming goes, and I, ahh, take that you are a stronge believer in god.

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Surya . 03 June 2009

very good phylosophy nicely expressed. posted 10 love surya

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~ Jon London ~ 14 April 2009

Fantastic penning Nora, you've captured this moment perfectly my friend..Bravo! !

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Aiswarya. T.anish 28 September 2008

it is a very nice poem.i loved it. nowadaya man is following the path in which he could find more and more money. i liked the lines 'are you caught up with the world and its glory? '

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

A nice poem, wel written. Like it.

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Adeiza A. 26 August 2008

So true Nora...'those riches will stay, when your body departs'. I particularly value this line. It talks sense. Thanks for these words in your poetry. Good write

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Mandara Pookal 27 July 2008

Your poem is very rich in content and is done very beauteously.

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James B. Earley 25 July 2008

Lust is indeed a fantasy, bringing only a temporary influence......one totally devoid of spiritual satisfaction Your message......quite profound!

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Nora Eason

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