Are You Here Comments

Love it - short, simple, effective. I take it as a comment on the doubts inherent in human relationships, but its air of enigma leaves plenty of scope for other interpretations. Definitely your best piece to date, Chiffon, imo.

I liked this poem, I wish there were more to it.

This intriguing poem is well written, Chiffon, and also charmingly phrased as well. You have the readers wondering whether this lover is real or imaginary, and the either a ghost or a long lost lover. It is that little mystery which makes this poem quite delightful! Carl.