Thursday, February 11, 2021

Are You Here To Take Me Home Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every time, that last year of life,
when I would go visit her in the nursing home
where she spent her days dreaming inside of those
walls that weren't her own,
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Smoky Hoss
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Rebecca Navarre 02 April 2022

You put it so beautifully and simply, Jesus stopped to visit and the titled perfect! .....

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Rebecca Navarre 02 April 2022

Oh, How beautifully heart touching! .. And so sweetly pictured, So beautifully, beautifully expressed! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++

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Bharati Nayak 26 February 2022

Wow--Such a heart touching write! This 'Home coming 'is so different.

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 23 December 2021

This is a wonderful poem that tugs at my heartstrings. To my favorites list and of course five stars!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 June 2021

smoI hope you ky this poem touched my heart because my mum is in a hospice i hope you are ok and how did you accept her death right now

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Cowboy Ron Williams 26 June 2021

Another great poem, another five stars and another added to my favorites list!

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Glen Kappy 27 March 2021

Hey, Smoky! Not spending much time in PH these days, I'm just reading this. It's warm and lovely and makes me think of my dad's passing. May grace keep us, love guide us—always. -Glen

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

magnificent in its simple emotions----5 star write and I fav this

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

heart-breaking and heart-encouraging at one and same time

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Juan Olivarez 18 February 2021

Losing your mother, has to be the hardest thing in the world. Very eloquently expressed.

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David Wood 12 February 2021

Such tender love, a beautiful poem full of love between mother and son. I've lost both parents and my wife and it reminded me of them in their final hours. A worthy 5*

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 February 2021

Smoky this poem brought me to tears. It reminded of my Dad in the hospital before he died. Bravo!

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Kim Barney 11 February 2021

Smoky, this is beautiful. I have given it five stars and added it to my favorite poem list. (This is part one of my comment, the second try because apparently my original comment was more than 300 characters.)

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Kim Barney 11 February 2021

(part 2) My own mother passed away more than 61 years ago, and I know that I will see her again.

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Kim Barney 11 February 2021

(3) My wife has lost three sisters and a brother-in-law in just over a year and a half, so we never know just how much time we have. Three of those four left very suddenly and unexpectedly.

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Varsha M 11 February 2021

This bis a beautiful composition capturing the sick mother expecting to come home. This is really good one.

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