Sunday, May 18, 2008

Are You Here Or There Comments

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your family is gone
you are to fight alone,
no matter were you go
you here the fight, the roar
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dani fries
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Crimson Love 28 December 2011

Decent read, I enjoyed it. You might want to separate (youhave) to You have. otherwise, perfect poem.

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Scotty Dogg 28 December 2011

I believe (truthfully) that you should take a course on basic grammer and spelling. These two are the foundation for good writing. Good luck!

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