Friday, November 11, 2011

Are You Here? Comments

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You rise in the morning, and you wonder where I am,
You go to bed and lie there wondering if life is just a sham.
As you drift off to sleep, you see me, but not my identity
You hold me close in your dreams, wake alone, such a pity.
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(De Va)
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Savita Tyagi 25 January 2014

Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed it.

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Bernard Snyder 25 January 2014

Well-written piece. Thanks for sharing such lovely words!

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Donnie Wolff 25 January 2014

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful

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Thomas Duncky 15 February 2012

As i re-read this poem i discoverd that it is a great masterpiece than i thought it was in the first place. I appreciate your shading more light De Va. Respect.

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(De Va) 25 January 2012

This poem was written for a soul mate who never was....it was a question put out there, and as I thought I could meet my mate online, but alas, it is not to be..so alone in this world and out of dreams I make my way, to find my mate in another lifetime...this is not about cyber....blessings to all....

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Thomas Duncky 25 January 2012

Goodbye my love who never was' is De Va talkin of virual cyber love here?

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Tanja Bulovic 11 January 2012

Oh, this is so close to home! Well done.

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Crimson Love 20 November 2011

'Why does this one part of life have to be so profound. Others live in perfect harmony with the one true love So you wonder if you overlooked me, or if I even exist' Such immaculate lines, truly this is a phenomenal write! Great job! :)

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Cosmic Dreamer 16 November 2011

My heart and soul are like jigsaw pieces... There is only one other in this world who can complete my picture... I really like this poem... Peace and love always...

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Kaila George 12 November 2011

with each learning you grow stronger...smiles hugs and blessings

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