Wednesday, April 6, 2016

Are You Having Fun? Comments

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Well, here we both sit on a poetry site.
Just wonder if you're having fun?
Though life can be boring, when 'pen' is in hand
I feel like a prospector born to the land.
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Bri Edwards 05 September 2016

hey, i was JUST TALKING ABOUT HAVING FUN at the end of my comment on one of your BJ poems! ! ! Just wonder if you're having fun? ...............not yet, but i want to! New veins offer treasures beyond all compare. ............cute! who used this trio first? you or winston? ? ? :) ...........It's blood, sweat, and tears all the way, these two lines don't seem to fit together: A field that gets plowed is an unlikely waste And character built by the problems you've faced. His mercy is swift.............that's not what i recall being swift in God's life i like this. and someone is waiting to use the computer; her computer! time to adios, sort of. bri :)

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Abhinav Ashish 07 April 2016

Good poem and inspiring also

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