Sunday, January 3, 2010

Are You Finished? Comments

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I knew once those cold hands touched my chest
The grin on your voice would start looking malicious
But my blind eyes and wishful thinking
Was hoping my assumptions were fictitious
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Michelle Asswit
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Aliah Kelly 03 January 2010

SOML. Basically, this is wonderful!

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Romeo Della Valle 03 January 2010

I have been there many, many times, but I survived, 'IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS', you will too, Michelle, you got what it takes to be a great poet and human being, Love...well penned piece, please, keep it up! you got great talent! 10+++

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Serenity Prayer 03 January 2010

you used some big words. lol. but good job writing this. it reminds me of one of my old guyfriends. good job.

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