Are You Even Looking? Comments

Saying i will be there for you, but after that you forget where 'there' is.nice poem 10.5

well he is a man you might have to talk real slow or write it out for him... maybe a lil of both lol. but not at one time, they cant multi task lol. cause you are heck of a woman any man should wanna be with you. good job. Becca

Does not know what he's missing does he, draw him a map 10 ++++ Chris

well thought out with fine imagery! excellent! 10+

Voila your ability to transform ordinary into exceptional and then arranging it into the tousled etui of a poem consumes all possible expression that sets forth praising it “And what do you mean you can't read my mind” an expression that lives in many a seasoning to get its indomitable flavor “it’s clearly labeled in this Perspex box” as if mumbling; twist opening a drawer for a sloppy husband, a drawer that has been this way since 1949. This is a timeless piece and I’d be so glad if I could read it in a book proudly stating by Viola Grey

A very clever worded verse this one Viola - I like the inferences, and the flow is somewhat reminiscent of slower, discovered complexities in life.... this is really a very good piece...... keep up the writing...... bestest from Fay.

well done, looking and seeing are two different kinds of action, seeing is a basic act of the senses where as looking can be accomplished only with concentration of the mind, thus in is English for the senses, we use the present simple case and for comprehension the present continuous case, intense poem 10

Hey Viola... I am glad I found this so I can give you a 10...

Nice poem I like your poems you write very well. take care Wendy