Friday, September 17, 2010

Are You An Angel? Comments

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Are you an Angel?
Or…
Maybe just a demon…
That has turned my soul.
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Kevin Carney
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Bert Bell 14 October 2010

Lovely poem. Nicely flowing with great use of metaphor. Great idea, too and well-written.

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Terence George Craddock 19 September 2010

Would you wear the dress in all white? Could you finally take those sacred vows? Or in the end wearing a dress in black? Looking so cold and callous… Over my grave. Better the runaway bride perhaps, than to share so many years, leading to such a fate.

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