Tuesday, November 24, 2015

Are You Afraid Yet? Comments

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Fear has no 'Stop Signs'
As the heart of the guilty races it's course
Sweat forms upon their heavy brows
Yet the guilty show no remorse
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 12 March 2016

Thank you, Mike. Glad you liked it.

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Mike Smith 28 February 2016

Yes our actions have a way of catching up with us. And when our actions are bad ones it creates a situation where looking over your shoulder and living in fear is the norm. Very good write Theo.

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Theodora Onken 17 January 2016

Thank you Veeraiyah for taking the time to read this. Yes, we all have had to take multiple jobs- just to make-during the early part of our marriage my husband had 2 jobs at once and i had one...we chose to live, survive honestly. We NEVER had any thought of obtaining it by doing anything illegal, EVER. Can honestly say our souls ARE in good hands- we are one with our God. Unfortunately there are some who would rather gain their fortune by gaining money from others in many an illegal, horrific way. My eyes have been opened as wide as they can get and am filled with much disappointment and hurt.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 January 2016

What people would do for money? Many may have two, three jobs to fulfill their needs, others may depend upon someone to fulfill their needs, after having burnt all the bridges.. but this poem talks about a few who have sold their soul for money.. Thank you for sharing your thought.

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