Thursday, March 6, 2014

Are You A Sun Or A Moon? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have seen you dancing naked,
At the horizon, so beautiful,
Where the formless meets another,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Barbara Nixon 07 March 2014

Stunning poem, beautifully descriptive. great write.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 March 2014

I have seen you fully naked, resting on the blue mattress, All the rowdy clouds are imprisoned for a while outstanding imagery!

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Gajanan Mishra 06 March 2014

yes, we all are part of truth, we are the truth. very fine, I like it most.

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