Are You A Champion? Comments

Of course, we can be champions by the grace of God but determination must be there. Very impressive and insightful poem for believers. Thanks

Deidre, if you're serious about becoming a better poet, you need to stop writing for a while and immerse yourself in some good contemporary poetry. I do like your rhyme thunk it/stunketh, though the humor doesn't seem appropriate to the message. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC (Report)