Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Are We Living In An Illusionary World! ! ! Comments

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Are we living in an illusionary world?
Or
Our mind thinks not much about it!
this sun never sets nor move from its place
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M. Asim Nehal
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Zuzu Mutairi 02 August 2020

Wonderful poem. Nicely written

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T Rajan Evol 14 October 2015

Two subjects handled carefully in this poem..Change and Illusion and the similarity between them is wisely defined.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 October 2015

I like the theme of your poem. One thing we know for sure, is that nothing stays the same, everything is a perpetual change.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015

Verily, the world is an illusion, what seems, is not and what doesn't seem, is there.....10

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

Reality is subjective, I agree. Thanks, Mohammed

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

illusionary world - don't take it seriousely, as any moving thought!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2015

So nicely envisioned and beautifully depicted. A brilliant poem I like most. The favourite lines are....all....10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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