Are we living in an illusionary world?
Or
Our mind thinks not much about it!
this sun never sets nor move from its place
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Two subjects handled carefully in this poem..Change and Illusion and the similarity between them is wisely defined.
I like the theme of your poem. One thing we know for sure, is that nothing stays the same, everything is a perpetual change.
Verily, the world is an illusion, what seems, is not and what doesn't seem, is there.....10
illusionary world - don't take it seriousely, as any moving thought!
So nicely envisioned and beautifully depicted. A brilliant poem I like most. The favourite lines are....all....10
Wonderful poem. Nicely written