Hatred pollutes in life's cold twisted streets
As minds are torn slowly apart.
Bleached souls need warm healing,
Unfettering from strain.
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yes you're absolutely right! ! we should watch out and guard our hearts...Don't let hatred corrupts us....It's a brain hitting poem...Love you gal..!
The poeem has created all the ambience needed to express the inner emotions.Might have a little better with respect to transition..9 sathya narayana
Fay, someone once wrote 'Live rightly, so shalt thou acquire unknown capacities of joy.' You are so right in order to have happiness we have to live the right kind of life. I'm afraid today the whisperings are even fainter than when I was young. Keep writing your wonderful whispers, you never know someone might hear. Bob
A wonderful poem. My 10 for this marvelous piece.