Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Are We? Comments

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You are the overdose in a room full of addicts.
You are the blade slicing threw sheep''s skin.
You are the bullet that fly''s out of the barrel of a gun.
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Gracey Newman
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the poetry is good.. but, the things that lead to the acts described are not.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2009

Are we... 'Lions lead by donkeys' Or 'The blind lead by the blind'? ..we are simple disgrace and desrve nothing from HIM.. beautiful poem with clear message... so vast insense and i liked it....10 read mine i am disgrce..... pulled from deep sleep..go bacl... visiting hell

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Gracey Newman 28 October 2009

Than youu sooooooooooooooooooooooo much

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Dylan Oppedahl 28 October 2009

You are the overdose in a room full of addicts. You are the blade slicing threw sheep''s skin. You are the bullet that fly''s out of the barrel of a gun that is very powerful and i liked how you could feel passion behind those words

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