Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Are These Straightforward Confessions Of Feelings Poems? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aren’t they too literal and too one- dimensional?
Where is their metaphor and their surprise?

Again then
I confess,
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Shalom Freedman
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Paul Brookes 12 May 2013

In the end we can only write our own truths they may be universal but come from our own experiences of this ghost of a life. Plainness is no bad thing. BB : O{

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The best poets are the honest and modest ones who accept their limitations and make the most of what they have, very nice poem, I really enjoyed it.

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