Saturday, June 7, 2008

Are These My Tears Comments

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Are these my tears?
As I stand in the rain
Are these my tears?
That brings me so much pain
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Ian Singer 26 August 2008

idk are they your tears? no just messing it was a good well writen poem you should sumbit your work i recomend anthology of poetry for young americans they use the best poem by teens and kids i have been in there book twice and in one of ther other poetry books the league of american poets

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abc123 abc123 08 June 2008

Great poem. I loved the way you wrote it. Keep up the good work

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