Are There Monsters In My Attic Or Is It All Inside My Head? Comments

Here it comes, I can hear it breathe And from the corner of my eyes I can see it's teeth I start to dig into it's skin with the cutlery It felt kinda hard and like bubble gum it was rubbery It made a loud growl and took a step back Made me feel like a killer named Jack I was covered in blood from head to toe I ate it's heart and it's soul I stole It made me feel stronger Smarter, bigger, and odder My skin turned to hair as I looked in the mirror I saw myself and I was stricken with terror I had glowing red eyes and pointy ears Those fangs and sharp claws we're all of my fears ....... .... You are a very nice story teller, though in the form of verses. Tell us some other stories too. Its very much enjoyable. I read it all in a single breath. Thank you poet for it. You deserve 10.

I guess all, good writing, thanks.,